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[spoiler]I have to agree about the epiolgue, but I can see what it was necessary. Ok, what confused me? Wasn't Harry named Teddy's godfather? Then why wasn't Teddy with the ...

Stalin's Ghost -- Martin Cruz Smith; and The Tenth Hour -- Laura Dietz. IMP

'Right. You think. Er, wait, honest?' ...Bloody stupid to an idiot with a switchblade. Unless you can run. I can, da? -Tov -- How long since you felt grateful for ...

Sure. Afraid of the nightmares under my bed, too, right? Er - serious? Ha. -Tov No. -Piers ...some dark. There's dark alleys, and, gavno - what're you s'posed to do? ...

If I knew, I'd tell you. ...Probably. Er, hell - I can say it with a straight face, right? -Tov I don't remember - in the Autumn, I think. As ...

I could say I don't know. Honest. Hey - can't be far away from what doesn't exist, right? -Tov The other side of the city, I suppose...ten miles. That's if ...

Sure. Fluffy pink bunnies always did it for me. Ha. Hell, been drinking what ? -Tov If you're joking, I can bloody well tell you I'm sick of idiots laughing ...

Never. Er, hey - it's Hell, right? -Tov -- Is there a point to pain?

Called 'pathetic fallacy', isn't it? The use of weather and/or seasons to reflect inner conflict or a character's interior distress or joy. I tend to avoid its conscious use. Though ...

Sam makes rather a good point on the sucbjective side of things. ^_^ If one is judging a character to be one thing, one type, rather than simply tossing in ...

Honestly, I like to know what a character looks like - which, I suppose, makes the question for me 'how' not 'whether or no'. ^_^ When I write, it depends ...

Same remarks as those above for Belle. ^_^ ...I think you've got Pocohontas quite a bit more balanced in proportions. But her shoulders seem...ah, broken? Crumpled rather. I very much ...

A pink sword, Adam? o0' Ha, on the note of levity, I love the arbitrary dash of different weapons and electricities in the thing. Still, the colours are a little ...

You know where and how to look at something, Fab, photographically speaking. They look like stories; rather than the commonplace noun 'buildings'. IMP

Personally, I would compact the outer designs a bit closer to the eye itself and do some varying line-thickness work. A second to Waffles' wise remarks. ^_~ Doubtless, evil ought ...